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CreateSpace Continued

Okay, maybe the worst part is over. In a previous post I spoke about getting the text right-on as far as formatting goes. It took me 10+ times to to upload text that fit the format. Finally it did, and I’m confident that the next book I do will go more smoothly. I certainly know a lot more now than I did then.

The next item was the cover – the wonderful cover – that Kurt Cyrus rendered. Kurt used the specs and formula provided by CreateSpace to get the spacing right and to make sure the lettering on the spine fit well. After a few tweeks here and there (toning down the color of the hawk’s tail, changing the font size on the back cover), it was ready to go. Kurt saved it as a pdf and sent it along to me.

Then came the moment of truth. Would the cover upload to the CreateSpace file? Would it take fourteen attempts and revisions in between each?
Nope, just one. A charm. So then, the whole file (interior and cover) had to undergo a review process to make sure the book fit the acceptable spec range.

Within twenty-four hours I had the results: Yes! Everything was a go. I proofed an online version of the book and all looked great. To be extra sure, I ordered a print copy because the gutters (the spacing on the inside of the pages) looked unbalanced to me. The only way I’d know for certain is to hold the book in my own hands. So that’s what I’m going to do before making it available to the reading public. So now, I wait. Patiently.

Trait Book Activity #1 – Ideas and Content

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Trait-related book activities, which can be great to use, can also be very frustrating if you cannot locate the specific book featured. I’ve been there. I know. If you have this experience, try a flexible approach. See if you can apply the activity to a similar book. So, if the focus is on writing leads (Organization), find another picture book that has a strong lead and use that activity. While this may not work for all activities, it’s worth trying. Build your own list of activities using your favorite picture books.
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Trait: Ideas and Content
Focus: Presenting information clearly and completely
Looking beyond the obvious

Book/Author: Alphabet City by Stephen T. Johnson

Publisher: Viking Press
ISBN: 0-670-85631-2

Summary: An illustrated tour of the lines, shapes, and forms found in our world, primarily in an urban setting. Using photographs, the author shows all the letters of the alphabet that he has found within the structures of a city.

What You Need: Sketch paper, pencils, and magazine photographs.

What You Do: Share the images of the book with students. Have students cut out magazine photographs in which they can find letters of the alphabet. Students can observe the classroom, building, or schoolyard and make sketches of items, both man-made and natural, that contain letters. Collect several to spell words. Make display of student work.

Notes: There are many other types of alphabet books to which this lesson could apply.

Using Kids’ Books for Writing Instruction

I have recently been getting inquiries about how to use kids’ books to help support writing instruction. Where do I start? Kids’ books can be very powerful in providing models for young writers. Call them model texts, call them, mentor text, call them whatever. Just use them. Please! Make them available in your classroom, read them aloud, talk about them, write about them.

Probably my favorite type of children’s book to use is the picture book. Short, sweet, colorful, fun. There’s something for everyone is these types of books. That’s why I like to call them “everybody books.” And that’s why I use them at all grade levels. That’s right, even middle and high school. Why upper grades? Because most older kids have some sort of positive connection to these books from their younger years. It may take some digging through the debris of our educational system to get to those positive connections, but it’s doable. Also, given the short length (32 pages) of these books, using them is efficient. Plus, did I mention fun. Nothing wrong with that.

Many teachers in the U.S. and around the world use Six Traits to help teach writing. Six Traits is not a writing curriculum and it is not a program. It is a way of thinking and talking about writing that helps kids become better writers. It provides students and teachers with a process and a common language they can use to enhance writing skills.

Don’t get me wrong: Six Traits is not THE answer to the challenge of teaching writing. It is, however, an important element in developing successful writers at every grade level. I have seen, firsthand, the power of Six Traits in my own classroom over the years and in the classrooms of the many teachers I have worked with as a writing consultant.

To help support your use of Six Traits, I will be posting activities and other resources. I hope you will make use of them as well as share them with your colleagues. Feel free to share your own as well.

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Trait-related book activities, which can be great to use, can also be very frustrating if you cannot locate the specific book featured. I’ve been there. I know. If you have this experience, try a flexible approach. See if you can apply the activity to a similar book. So, if the focus is on writing leads (Organization), find another picture book that has a strong lead and use that activity. While this may not work for all activities, it’s worth trying. Build your own list of activities using your favorite picture books.

Good luck!

CreateSpace Journey

The journey on CreateSpace continues. As I previously mentioned, I worked diligently to get the manuscript print-ready, and was able to do this after reading, rereading, and rereading some more, along with some outstanding outside help (Cameron on the tech details, Ava on the text details). When I was finally satisfied (is one ever finally satisfied?), I started the upload. All went well, at least for awhile.

When my book file got uploaded, I received a message that there were “issues” with it. The main issue was that the margins I had selected were not acceptable. Some words were too close to the edges of the page. Okay, easy fix, right? No. Because, when you change the margins, that alters the number of words on the page and that affects where those words appear on the pages. So, you may get a page (an end of a chapter) where there is one line or even one word on it. Not good.

That means you have to go back over the entire document and check each page. While doing that, I noticed that a few pages had some extra lines spaces. They’d show up randomly, like right in the middle of pages. That required me to go back to my original document, where I found that I had made extra returns as I typed. Then the original had to be uploaded again.

To make a long story short, I uploaded the original many times (more than 10) before I got all the issues resolved. All except for one, which I’m not going to share since you will probably not even notice it in the printed (or electronic) copy.

All in all, this has been a learning experience and a lesson in extreme patience. The folks at CreateSpace, who I call often, have been supportive and pleasant. The next step will be uploading the cover, which is being completed as I type.

Author’s Alternative

Just as there are many reasons to have a book published, there are lots of ways to make that happen. I have recently undertaken a journey with CreateSpace to publish my middle grade novel, Moving Targets. This is a story about bullying that I have been working on for quite some time. For awhile, I thought the topic would be exhausted, but it seems to holding its own and even gaining importance over time.

So, why CreateSpace? Well, I’ve seen books done by the company and the quality looks good. You have many choices of trim size and page count.
Best of all, it’s print-on-demand so you can order as many, or as few, copies that you want. And then there’s the bonus: the per-copy cost is consistent. In other words, you don’t have to order a skillion copies to get them at a reasonable (and salable) cost.

There’s a step-by-step process by which you create your book. I have yet to upload the text because I keep going over and over and over it. The folks at CreateSpace have informed me that the text need to be print-ready when I upload it, so I become an obsessed copy-editor. This after I have already edited the book for content. That’s been a bit easier for me. The copy-edit part challenges my attention to details. What’s really helped, though, is developing a style sheet for the book that includes punctuation instances as well as other quirky thinks I’m doing.

For example, during I use the word gonna when the kids are talking. It’s a style choice I consciously made to help make the dialogue sound more realistic. But I stopped there, choosing not to include things like wanna, coulda, shoulda, etc. Too much of that, I believe, would bog down the reader. So, it’s a matter of balance and degree.

The biggest challenge for me has been the actual formatting of margins, gutters, font type and size, and spacing. What really helped me was looking at other books – sort of mentor texts – and seeing what others have done. None of that helped, however, when I go to the very end of the text and the last line of the 150 or so pages got split, with a few words on one side of the page, and a few on the other. Hour after maddening hour I worked on that, playing with the settings, looking at online forums, using bad language, none of which helped. Finally, I called a tech genius friend, Cameron Yee, who figured it out in less than three minutes. I am continuously amazed at the knowledge and skills of people on this planet. Oh, the problem was with the justification setting.

So, that’s the extent of the project thus far. Next week I’ll be uploading the text and hopefully the cover, done by one Kurt Cyrus, another cohort brimming with talent. Until then, I will keep searching for rivers and widows and look forward to the time I push the Enter key, which will finalize the upload. If you have any interest in publishing something, check out CreateSpace. As far as I’m concerned, so far, so good. Will let you know how the process proceeds.

Book Choice – The Beetle Book

The Beetle Book by Steve Jenkins Houghton Mifflin, 2012 32 pages

If you lined up every living thing on the planet, one of every four would be a beetle. Amazing, huh? Just like this book, which gives readers a detailed look at these creatures. You can find out what makes a beetle a beetle, the parts of a beetle, and the unique qualities of beetles (e.g. the forest fire beetle has special heat sensors that can detect fires more than 20 miles away!). You can find out about the smallest beetle (size of a period), the largest beetle (big as a hand), what beetles eat, how they talk, and their fighting strategies. Illustrations in this book are bright, colorful, and as detailed as the text, making it a great choice for Six-Traiters (not Traitors!).

The Midwest Book Review

Getting your book reviewed is an essential element in spreading the word about your book, especially if you’re an Indie author. An organization I have found to be accessible and useful is The Midwest Book Review (www.midwestbookreview.com). Located in Wisconsin (is that really Midwest?), the service has been around since 1976 as a resource for booksellers, librarians, readers, and writers.

A book review is a reflection of one person’s opinion at a moment in time. That’s what I say as a brace myself before reading a review of any of my works. Still, it’s helpful when the words are positive. Here’s what The Midwest Book Review said about one of my latest books, The Magic of A.C. Gilbert: “A love of the simple joys can take a man far. “The Magic of A.C. Gilbert” is a children’s picturebook styled look at Albert Carlton Gilbert, who is known by many as the man who saved Christmas by opposing Congress’ orders to cease all non-war production in World War I. With realistic, full-color artwork throughout, his life as a magician, athlete, and toymaker is discussed, making for an enticing story for young readers. “The Magic of A.C. Gilbert” is a choice pick for younger readers who want to pick up a bit of history. Recommended.”

Reviews at the site are archived for five years. Other helpful reader and writer resources are included at the site as well, as is the opportunity to join their cadre of reviewers. I reviewed books for many years (although not at this site), and I have found the experience very helpful in improving my writing skills along with my knowledge of the publishing market. Something worth considering.

Moving Targets

Moving Targets, my middle-grade novel about bullying, is making headway and moving closer to its publication date in February. The other day I had the great pleasure of sitting down with the illustrator who is creating the cover art for the book. Kurt Cyrus, the talented and experienced picture book artist (and writer too!) is putting the finishing touches on the “face” of the book. Here’s a snap of the artiste and a sneak preview. Check out Kurt’s website when you have a chance.

Rejection!

Got a rejection from Barron’s the other day. Nothing new there. I’ve gotten many rejections – hundreds – over the years. My very first book, The Chewing Gum Bookwas rejected by 75 publishers before it was accepted. Other works of mine have been rejected as much and never gotten accepted. That’s the nature of the publishing world: the overwhelming majority of manuscripts get turned down.

So yes, I am used to rejection. I use each rejection letter as a reality check. Okay, so this particular work is not right for Barron’s. Does that mean the work is not right for any publisher? Not necessarily, but it just might be. How will I find out? Keep sending it out. When I get to the end of all publishers, and all of them have rejected it, I have a question to ask myself: Do I have a need for this work to be published and available for people to read? If the answer is no, the manuscript gets filed. If the answer is yes, then I become the publisher. And the marketing director, and the promotions manager, and the sales team. Not the easiest route, for sure, but a way to assure that the book is born.

The letter I got from Barron’s was mostly the typical rejection letter: “we get a lot of submissions, we can’t answer personally, blahblahblah.” But there was a gem in the letter, at the bottom, waiting to be found. It was a quote from F. Scott Fitzgerald, a guy who knew something about the writing biz. “Never confuse a single defeat with a final defeat,” he said. This is a good quote to remember, for the writing world as well as the world at-large.

Lewis and Clark Revisited

It’s not hard to revisit the Lewis and Clark. It’s a classic tale of exploration, discovery, and then exploitation. It’s compelling, captivating, and it’s got something for everyone. Since I wrote the original Passage book back in 2003, I’ve made it a point to continue to encourage teachers and students to explore the topic. Not only did I redo the book with new illustrations and tine-tuned text, but I have rewritten a Lewis and Clark simulation that I am currently working with a local school to enact. It’s quite fun to see the kids (fourth graders, in this case) learn about this historic journey and, best of all, come up with questions that they then seek answers to.

With the republication of my Passage book, I was invited to attend the annual dinner of the Oregon chapter of the Lewis and Clark Heritage Foundation this past weekend. It was held at Fort Clatsop in Astoria, the site of the Corps’ camp during the winter of 1805-1806. The dinner was awesome, and I got to sign books and meet folks who are passionate and knowledgeable on all things Lewis and Clark.

The following day, we stopped by the Salt Works in Seaside, where members of the Corps of Discovery boiled sea water to obtain salt, a very important supply for the party. Seaside is a ways from the fort and I always wondered why they went farther than they had to in order to get water from the ocean. The answer eluded me for the longest time, but I finally found out. Hope you can find out too!

Hmmm. Why is the Salt Works so far from Fort Clatsop? They could have made it a lot closer. Why didn't they?