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Travel Writing For All

As someone once said, “Travel is the only thing you buy that makes you richer.” I agree with that. I also concur with Saint Augustine who said, “The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only one page.”

So, I travel. Fortunately, I have a footloose son, Tyler, who still wants to spend time with me so he invites me to join him in various parts of the world: Japan, Africa, Colombia. We’ve explored Alaska and done a coast-to-coast road trip. Our latest adventure took me to the Republic of Georgia (where Tyler had been teaching) and then on to Turkey.

The Gergeti Trinity Church in northern Georgia

The Gergeti Trinity Church in northern Georgia

I used to think that traveling would take me away from my writing. After all, when I’m away from home, I’m away from my computer, my files, research, and books. But, over the years, I’ve learned that travel can be extremely helpful writing-wise. Five or ten or twenty-four hours on various planes gives you time to think and plan, jot notes down, and really give a second (or third or fourth) look at what you’ve written, away from the everyday distractions of home. I often take a clean, hard copy of a recent work and go over it through the eyes of a reader rather than a writer. It’s really helpful.

Being out in the world always gives me ideas for new writing projects. And, it always provides me with opportunities to write. Since I love to take pictures when I’m traveling and I enjoy editing and organizing those pictures into albums when I return home, writing helps clarify the experience for myself and for others who view the pictures.

The challenge is to write a narrative of the pictures that will connect them as well as provide more information. Transitions are important, and brevity is essential because of the limited space. My goal is that when I’m done I’ll have something that will have meaning for others and for me.

Classroom applications are easy here. Have kids bring in several pictures of an experience they had. Or, they can draw the pictures. Then, have them write a narrative that goes along with the pictures/drawings. Share it with others and you have an authentic writing experience that goes beyond their eyes and the eyes of the teacher.

Here’s the link to my adventure: https://plus.google.com/101818842090327599007/posts/ekxv4UpggmZ

 

“I Remember…”

Poet Laureate William Stafford (1914-1993) once said that the best writing prompt is “I remember…” I agree. What prompt could be more inclusive and accepting of a wide range of responses? All you need to address this prompt is a memory (making one up would be okay in my book, too).

I’ve been using this prompt with writers young and old for many years. It’s a generous and friendly prompt. What do you remember? What do you remember about being a certain age or living in a specific place? What do you remember about your friends? Your not-so-much friends? What do you remember about anything?

Such a broad prompt can cause paralysis in some writers. One way to remedy that is to use timelines. Make one of your life. For some of us, the page would have to be quite long. But wait, calibrate the vertical hash-marks in five year (or even ten year – wow, you’re old!) increments.

Next, reflect on your life and think of highlights (and lowlights, too) then jot them down on the timeline in the appropriate places, the highlights above the line and the lowlights below the line. Of course, these don’t have to be the very best and worst things that happened to you. They could be just things you recall. Everyday, usual occurrences can be powerful, too.

Once you have some memories written on your timeline, select one and write about it. Make sure to add quality details to make it interesting to readers. You may be surprised at how additional details, thoughts, and memories flow into your mind as you write. Which, of course, will give you more topics to explore with your writing!

 

 

Ridin’ the Roads of Georgia

So, we’re hurtling down the narrow highway in a mini-bus—a marshrutka—on the way to Stepantsminda, a small town near Georgia’s border with Russia. We’re packed in tight, Tyler and I taking up two of the four back row seats. Any other seat would have been preferable, but people claimed them before us, and they paid by having to sit in blistering heat while we waited outside in the shade.

Tyler has the window seat and I sit with the aisle in front of me, which provides a little stretching area since the fold-down seat that would fill that space is the only seat unfilled. On the other side of me sits a middle-aged man, thick and glowering. He staked out his territory early, opening his legs as far as his chubby hips allow. I, however, won the shoulder battle, and rested my back against the seat while he leaned forward.

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Two hours into the ride, the driver brakes hard and swerves onto the shoulder of the road. He talks excitedly on his cell phone, then slams the gearshift into reverse and starts backing down the highway. BACKING DOWN THE HIGHWAY! This is not just a little country road with no traffic. This is a highway with cars and trucks whizzing by, most of them blowing their horns at us.

Unaffected by the horn blasts, the driver continues, using his side mirrors to guide his erratic path. The response from inside the bus is silence, except for the guy sitting in front of us who snorts with laughter. My heart is racing and my breathing shallow as I imagine a fiery death for us all, except for the idiot driver who will most likely be thrown to safety. Isn’t that the way these things usually go?

We continue on—backwards—not for a hundred yards or two, but for several miles. When the bus finally comes to a stop, the driver jumps out and races to the back of the vehicle, where he greets an old bearded man walking along the road. The driver ushers the man to the side of the bus, pulls open the sliding door, and points to the only available space, the fold-down seat in front of me.

The bearded man slowly surveys his sole seat option as well as the mass of humanity inside the bus. He speaks to the driver in Georgian and the driver responds, their voices rising over the sounds of the cars and trucks whooshing by us. And then, the driver slams the door closed, gets back behind the wheel, and drives as the man watches us leave. Forward. At last.

I stretch my legs out into the empty space in front of me and wonder how many more hours until we reach our destination.

 

Coming Never To A Theater Near You

You never know where the winds of interest will blow the writing fires. I have reveled in the vast lands of nonfiction most of my writing life, but I’ve also braved the world of novels, short stories, plays, and poetry as well. Lately, I have entered an area in which I have always had interest: screen writing.

This is not my first experience with this type of writing. Years back, I took a screenwriting class, got enthused, and wrote a few Seinfeld scripts that landed me an agent but no sales. “It’s written in-house,” the agent told me. “If you want to write scripts, write an original screenplay (= movie).”

I grumbled, groused, and then moved on to other projects that excited me. Years passed, and then one day I was in Seattle, visiting a friend and viewing a few Mariner baseball games. As usual during that time, the Mariners were not doing too well and the papers reported that the team was considering firing their manager.

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What if? I thought. What if they decided to hire a nonprofessional—just a regular guy who coached kids—to finish out the season? And what if this guy was having challenges of his own at the time?

These questions became the seeds for my story, and the tagline (every movie has one) became “A man takes on baseball. And himself.”

I thought about this for a year, and for the past six months I have worked at trying to transport it from my head to paper. Along the way I have read books on the craft (including the technical aspects of the genre), read other screenplays, watched lots of movies, and took copious notes.

What I enjoyed was the spare nature of the writing: it’s mostly dialogue and some directions, but little room for description. That also makes it challenging, too. Descriptions help you create context and make smooth transitions.

Last week I finished the first draft, one hundred fifteen pages of it. Like every first draft I have ever done, there was relief involved, relief that the story had held together to its conclusion. Is the story any good? I don’t know. Really, I don’t. I have printed it out and set it aside. At some point in time—a week, a month, five years—I’ll return to the script, this time with fresh eyes and I’ll read it.

And then I’ll get to work, the real work, of rewriting it. How long will that take? I don’t have a clue. A couple weeks. A month. A year. As long as it takes, until I’m satisfied.

And then what? Then, I’ll try to find a home for it, a home where the script can be made into a movie. This will be a daunting task, indeed, and the odds will be long. Maybe not as long as singing at the Met or batting cleanup for the Orioles, but the chances of my script ever being made into a movie are slim.

So, why take the time to work on such a project in the first place, when the odds are clearly against you and where other avenues of writing provide you with a much better chance for success? The answer is simple: You never know. You just never know.

 

 

Furry Writing Prompt

Tired of the same old writing prompts? Try a furry one!

Earlier this week I took our one-year-old dachshund/chihuahua/Jack Russell mix dog – Toby – into the local kindergarten class. It was hard to tell who was more excited, Toby or the kids. After things calmed down, we focused on observation, with a special emphasis on details (color, size, ears, tongue). The kids then worked in their journals. Some chose to draw first; others wrote first.

Toby circulated around the room as the kids worked, providing them with an up-close opportunity to add additional details. Some added how soft his ears felt, others mentioned his sharp claws. Reading their finished pieces to Toby was a powerful motivator. So was having their picture taken with him.

Of course, description is only one of the many ways to direct this lesson. Kids could have created stories in which Toby was the main character. They could have written about their own pets, or they could have given their opinions about dogs and provided reasons. So many options, so little time!

Yes, this caused excitement and exuberance. But, isn’t that what we want writing to be about?

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True Confession

I have a confession to make.

I’ve got mice. No, not a pair of cute, furry creatures happily living in a multi-colored plastic home, complete with exercise wheel and fresh cedar shavings. My mice are living in the walls and dark recesses of my house. As to the number, I’m not sure. It could be five, or fifty.

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We discovered them about a week ago: the skittering sound of movement under the floors and chewing beneath the kitchen. The next night a hole the size of a nickel was chewed into the dog food bag that sat in our pantry closet. Mouse droppings completed the scene.

All right, the sound of mice is one thing. Mice in your food—even dog found—is quite another. The next thing you know, they’d be helping themselves to the human food, and then eating off our plates at dinnertime. It was time to seriously address the issue.

But, what to do. We weren’t interested in killing the creatures. After all, their lives have value, like ours. However, sharing our home with them was not an option. There are health and safety issues involved. So, we developed a mouse immigration plan in which we would capture the mice and relocate them to another location. The local woods would be just the spot: far enough from any houses and lots of cover to keep them safe from hawks and roaming cats.

I made a trip to town and picked up a Tin Cat mouse trap ($13.97, Victorpest, made in the USA), a metal contraption that could hold up to thirty mice. Hopefully, it wouldn’t have to.

The first night, victory! We got one and successfully released it. When I opened the top, instead of scurrying away, the mouse looked me right in the eyes and held my gaze. Was he shocked at the act of compassion? Was he thanking me? Whatever it was, it didn’t last long; the mouse made his way into the thick undergrowth.

The second night, same result. One mouse, relocated. After that, things went sideways. Several nights of no mouse, food gone, and lots of poop. I taped up all the holes on the trap thinking that the mice were small enough to escape, but results were the same over the next few nights. We were dealing with some clever creatures.

That’s when I turned to the internet and started serious research, looking for the best live mouse traps. [READERS: If you don’t want the details of my mouse trap testings, you have permission to skip to the end] Amid the claims and verbiage, I decided to see to see for myself which was the best. So, I ordered the Havahart Live Animal Cage Trap model #1020 ($16.74, Havahart, made in China), the Smart Mouse Trap ($12.65, Seabright Laboratories, made in Mexico), and a packet of three Mice Cubes ($9.03, Pied Piper International, made in the USA).

The test was on! Over the next few nights we caught seven mice in the traps. Which trap worked best? The Mice Cube, a plastic tubular rectangle with a free-swinging door at one end. The mice smelled the food inside, pushed their way in, chowed down, and couldn’t get back out the door.

Releasing them from the Mice Cube is a cinch: just turn the trap over, the door flops open, and the mouse waltzes out. Then, all you have to do is wash the trap out (I used a hose), put more food in it, and set it back out. The main disadvantage of this trap was its small size, which filled up with mouse droppings and urine if the mouse was in there for very long. So, if you’re going to use this one (and I suggest you do), check it regularly (several times a day), or just put it out overnight when the mice are most active.

The other trap worth mentioning is the Smart Mouse Trap, which is molded plastic in the shape of a house (homey, huh?), with a spring-activated door at one end that snaps closed when the mouse goes in for the food. It has a door at the other end (the Freedom Door – yes, really!) that slides up to release the inhabitants. This trap is bigger than the Mice Cube, but it also has a bigger price and takes more effort to set.

The other two traps, both metal, did not perform as well. As mentioned previously, the Tin Cat wasn’t able to consistently capture its prey. And the Havahart, which did not capture any, was the most challenging to set.

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A week later, nine mice have been captured and relocated to selective locations. The next few nights have been quiet, and it’s been a joy to find empty traps in the mornings and no evidence of mouse activity around.

Is this the end of them? Who knows. Maybe they are amassing somewhere in the depths of our house to make a headlong assault into our living space. Or, maybe they’ve left to find their missing relatives.

So, what does all this have to do with writing? I knew you were wondering. The answer: plenty! The everyday workings’ of your life—the mundane, the joys and the challenges—all compete for your time, your efforts, and your creativity. They also can provide the impetus for writing, both fiction and faction. The possibilities of how this experience could be translated into a writing project, or projects, are endless.

The best material for writing comes from living your life.

 

Three Questions: Bryan Reed

Three Questions is a periodic feature of this blog. The focus is on three questions asked of everyday people involved in curious pursuits.

The subject of this Three Questions post is Bryan Reed of Eugene, Oregon. Bryan is a multi-talented guy, both in education as well as music. He is a creative and enthusiastic English Language Learner teacher at Riverbend Elementary School in the Springfield (OR) School District. After hours, Bryan plies his musical talents with his band, The Killer B’s, at a variety of local venues.

Fortunately for his students, Bryan integrates music into his classroom to help make learning engaging. For teachers, he presents practical workshops and develops useful materials. Check out these links:

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCEqo9mfkn_QUY8-Jdn74Mdg

http://learningrocks.bandcamp.com/track/the-six-traits-of-writing-rap

 

1. What role does music play in your life (outside of education)?

From an early age, I’ve been enchanted by music so much that I couldn’t just listen, I’ve had to be a part of it. My parents would ask the three-year-old me to sing for family and friends when we got together, which I happily did. Not long after, I got into harmonicas, as a teenager, guitar, as a young man, electronic music and recording equipment. Most recently, I’ve taken up the fiddle, in part to join my daughter in her studies, but more so because I love old time music and bluegrass, and when I go out to jam with other musicians, which I do at least once a week, it’s good to have an instrument other the ubiquitous guitar. Though I regularly perform with my band, The Killer B’s, I prefer jamming because to skillfully jump into new songs requires great spontaneity, deference and responsiveness. I love to play in that!

2. How does music enhance learning?

Finish this sentence, “Humpty Dumpty sat on…” Why should that meaningless bit of fluff be in our heads? It’s because someone put it into a rhyme with a singsong pattern. Marketers exploit music as a means of transmitting their messages, and such is the power of this media that we cannot stop their slogans and theme songs from resounding in our heads. Educators who use music for the purpose of teaching academic content are no doubt weaving that content into their students’ memory. I put this song together for a workshop I often present to fellow educators called, Learning Rocks! Using Music to Teach Academic Content:

Kids Respond to Rhythm and Rhyme

To the tune of When Johnny Comes Marching Home Again

Kids respond to rhythm and rhyme. Hurrah! Hurrah!

Kids respond to rhythm and rhyme. Hurrah! Hurrah!

Just plug your content into a verse

And kids’ll beg for a chance to rehearse

And we’ll all go marching to success in the content we teach

3. What advice would you give non-musical teachers on how to add music to their classrooms?

A teacher’s lack of musical aptitude does not diminish the power of music to reach and teach their students. Chanting or rapping a verse without melody still has the magic! Teachers who think their students are too old for this approach should think again; some of the goofiest songs I’ve learned are from wildly enthusiastic teenagers at sleep away camp. Confidently bring the beat and your students will join you. Teachers who are not comfortable with music should, nonetheless, use it, just as teachers who are uncomfortable with technology should learn to use computers, and I, who am uncomfortable with spelling, must continue to just do my best.

Another piece from Learning Rocks:

Five great reasons to use music specifically to teach and learn academic content:

  • Music is fun and contributes to an atmosphere of low anxiety, which is crucial for academic learning.
  • Music, particularly when integrated with movement, activates a variety of intelligences and accesses the learning styles of many children.
  • Music, even just chanting in rhythm, imprints lyrics into memory.
  • Music engages and integrates both sides of the brain.
  • Repeated readings of poetry or lyrics build reading fluency as well as comprehension.

Five great ways to use music to teach and learn academics:

  • Highlight key vocabulary, sometimes letting the students seek and identify key words. Ask, “Which words sound interesting or important?”
  • Sketch or add photographs by lyrics to edify meaning.
  • Use and make up motions, or use sign language to go along with the words.
  • In classrooms, using an overhead projector or document camera to see and work with a song is okay. Students can also have their own photocopied lyrics pages. On chart paper though, songs can stay up and the text and graphics can be a resource for students.
  • With beginning readers, focus on sound symbol correspondence in addition to word meaning.

 

 

Teachers Are Learners, Too

Dear Students,

Do you ever wonder what your teachers do when they’re not working with you in school? Teachers do a lot of different things, but one things they ALL do is learn. Yes, teachers are learners too, just like you! They are always learning about new things to teach, and how best to teach them.

Recently, I had the pleasure of working with the teachers at Trillium Charter School in Portland, Oregon. If you are a student at Trillium, see if you can recognize the teachers in the pictures below. Together we explored different ways of helping you become better writers. We did this by sharing, doing activities, and WRITING.

We each wrote about a teacher who had made a difference in our lives. I wrote about my fourth grade teacher, Mrs. Domovich, who had helped me deal with the heavy pressure I put on myself. Your teachers each wrote about their special teacher. After finishing our drafts, we got help from each other (editing) and shared our writing.

What about you? Have you ever had a special teacher? When was it? What did your teacher do? I hope you will write about the teacher. Add details to help readers get a good sense of what that teacher meant to you. If you can’t think of a special teacher, you could write about what traits a special teacher would have.

When you complete your writing, I hope you will share it. You can share it with other students in your class and/or you could add it to Comments section of this blog post. Most of all, I hope you will share it with the teacher you wrote about. It will be a special gift the teacher will never forget.

 

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Managing A Classroom

What an enjoyable time working during the last two weeks with the K-5 teachers at Trillium Charter School in Portland, Oregon. Several questions at the end of our session involved classroom management, and it inspired me to reflect on my experience managing a classroom.

For the first several years of teaching, I was very confused and uncertain when it came to classroom management. I was working in an elementary school (K-8) and was able to observe a variety of approaches, from the physical to the laissez faire. Like hats, I “tried on” several methods but none seemed to fit me. This left me very unsettled and, as a result, I left teaching and did not plan to return.

“Never say never” is a good saying, and I returned to education. When I did return, it was in a fairly structured environment where I learned about “Assertive Discipline” developed by Lee Cantor in the 1970s. What I liked about this approach is that it included clear expectations and consequences, things I hadn’t worked out to my satisfaction previously.

Over time, I also learned about the work of Rudolph Dreikurs, which I added to my system, especially the “logical consequences” part and the idea of children making choices. I also incorporated some ideas promoted by Alfie Kohn.

What worked for me was a system in which there were clear expectations as well as reasonable and timely consequences that lowered the likelihood of constant reminding (=nagging). The foundation for my system was “Everyone has the right to learn, and no one has the right to keep others from learning.” It was my mantra, and the basis for how I approached student behavior.

A few basic rules were created, often with input from students. These rules were clearly posted, and they generally included three things: “Hands and feet to yourself; Listen and follow directions; Show respect for the rights of others.” Yes, these overlap but I found that using the concrete (Hands and feet to yourself) as well as the abstract (Respect the rights of others) covered the bases. I used these with a variety of grade levels, from second through eighth.

Also clearly posted were consequences for not following the rules. As with the rules, these were often developed with students help. Typically, the first step was a warning. After that, a brief time-out and an associated conference with me (during recess or choice time). Following that was a time-out (sometimes in another classroom) with a parent contact.

Administrators’ lives are action-packed so I saved their use for emergencies only. They appreciated that, and I learned that I could count on strong support in the rare cases when I needed to involve them.

Many things change over time, but some things don’t, like the need for a well-managed classroom, where each child is able to pursue his or her learning in a safe and supportive environment. If I were teaching today, I would still have expectations as well as consequences, and all would be clearly communicated and posted. I’d do my best to be fair as well as consistent in carrying out this program. I would also include a reward (sorry Alfie, rewards aren’t always bad!) to support and encourage positive behavior. This can be done reasonably, and I prefer the group type in which the class works together to earn special activities.

I would also explore the work of Marshall Rosenberg (Nonviolent Communication, but I prefer the term Compassionate Communication). His work has been very helpful to me on an interpersonal level, and I think there are some exciting possibilities for classroom use.

Good luck as you work to find an approach that works for your students as well as you. It’s a challenge, but a challenge well worth the effort.

 

Make Your Own Gum!

Being a chewing gum consumer for more than 50 years, and having written three books on the topic, I thought it was high time to become a chewing gum maker. Thanks to a company (Glee ) that produces gum-making kits, it was easier than I thought. The kit contained everything I needed to make the gum. The kit comes with a gum base (the chewy part of gum) made with natural chicle, unlike the gum bases in most gum today, which contain only synthetic materials.

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Chewing gum is made up of three main ingredients: the base, sweetener, and flavoring. First, I heated up the gum base until it was nice and gooey. This makes it easier to add the other ingredients.

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Chicle gum base

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Melting gum base

I added corn syrup (sweetener) to the base and started mixing it in. After I got it mixed in, I poured the sticky blob of base onto a cutting board on which I had sprinkled confectioner’s sugar (more sweetener). The sugar coated the base and made it easy to knead, which I did by pushing and folding it over and over.

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Getting ready to knead

Then I divided the base into two parts and added the two different flavorings—cherry and mint—one to each. I mixed the flavoring in by kneading some more. When I got it all mixed in, I had a choice to make: what form would my gum take? Would it be stick gum, chunk gum, ball gum, or would it take some other shape?

Kneading the base

Kneading the base

I decided on ball gum, since that was the shape Thomas Adams used in 1869 when he made the first modern gum. I was repeating history. Cool! So, I pulled off small chunks of the mixed base and rolled them into balls. Adams wrapped his gum in tissue paper, but I decided to put mine in aluminum foil.

Rolling the balls

Rolling the balls

But not before the tasting. It tasted like real gum! And I had done it myself, in about 40 minutes.

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Taste ready!